Afterworld Chapter 1 Draft
Extract from my novel, obviously work in progress…
I awoke to a turbulent wind that shrouded my entire body. My clothing flapped and after a few sleepy blinks, I realized I was falling. Fast. Sounds replayed in my mind; screams, or was it metal tearing? It quickly ceased to matter, like the memories of a dream upon waking. I couldn’t see any further than my dangling feet, as the sky was smothered in a sandstorm. My heart fluttered as I swept around like a lost leaf. It moved past my feet and further away into the sky as golden brown clouds. Only then did I think to turn and see just what I was about to strike.
A flurry of red dirt grazed across me and I rolled away about 7 metres from my point of impact. It didn’t hurt much, but if I wasn’t awake before that I definitely was then. I spluttered and wiped the red dust out of my face. I was covered in the stuff. I stood up with a wobble and surveyed the landscape.
It was like I had landed on Mars… Only if Mars were populated by intelligent beings that dwelled in big, ominous black towers with large stretches between them. I had to stare at the tower closest to me. Pointed into the sky at the height of the Empire Estate Building, but looked as though it had been built in the Victorian Era… Out of metal. Except, the metal was naturally black. Every few stories the tower was surrounded by a ring of frightening spikes. I should have been scared.
I heard some more crashes and noticed others dropping down out of the sand clouds in the sky. I jumped as a body sprayed a wave of dirt at me, rolling up right next to me on the floor. He lay there unconscious for a few seconds and I stared at him with careless curiosity.
“Are you… Alrighty?” I asked. I nudged him with my foot, and he leapt awake like a frog that had been playing dead. He crawled back onto his back and stared at me wide-eyed. He looked from side to side faster than a sparrow, then crawled up to me.
“W-we’re in Hell… Aren’t we?” He asked. I took a moment to survey the landscape again. The sky was filled with bodies, just falling like raindrops into the wastelands.
“That would make sense, actually.” I responded, “Yes.”
“OH GOOD LORD!” He wailed, and clenched his hands onto my jeans. He started crying, “I’M ONLY TWENTY-SEVEN! I HAD SO MUCH LIFE LEFT TO LIVE! I’LL NEVER WIN ALICE’S HEART NOW… OH GOD!”
“Please, get off.” I said, gently kneeing his face. He coiled up into a ball and ran his fingers through his mousey greyish-brown hair.
“I didn’t see you on the train. Well, it was a big train I suppose. Busy too. Oh my god, so many of us died. I almost feel like I’m dreaming…”
“I don’t remember a train.”
“Well you must’ve been on the train. It was a train crash. That’s why we’re here.”
“…Oh.” And that was when the train crash idea began to enter my mind. A train crash. It makes sense. Being a young british individual I probably relied on the public transport extensively and met an unfortunate fate. I should have known the rail system would bring forth my death. “That also makes sense.”
“THOSE BLOODY TRAINS!” He pounded the ground with his fists and clenched his teeth. I had to laugh.
“Yeah. Trains are shit.” I grabbed his collar and pulled him to his feet, “Your name?”
“Edward, mate. You?”
“I’m…” The reflexive response to answering the common question left a vacancy in my brain. My mouth opened but no words emerged, like I had forgotten my lines, “…well…”
“That short for William?”
“No! I’m thinking. It’s, um…”
Eventually, I remembered being called ‘Ade’. Edward notified me that Ade is usually short for Adrian, so we worked out from that, that my name is Adrian. I then told him to describe my appearance. “Good lookin’ fella I suppose. You know, from a masculine perspective. Quite dark skin for a white guy. Black hair. Piercin’ blue eyes. Dress sense… Pretty casual, but pretty cool too.” I was wearing jeans, a black belt, a leather jacket and a tight fitting red shirt. He failed to mention my earring, too.
“Thanks for that.”
“No problem… Oh god, where do we go?”
We noticed a crowd of people being gathered into a group. Bat-like shadows were flapping around and scaring people, but they seemed harmless to me. A woman with long red hair was standing on a podium outside the closest tower holding a megaphone,
“GATHER HERE, PLEASE. GATHER HERE!
“I think we need to gather over there, Ed.”
“Yeah… Can I follow you? I’m… I’m fucking terrified.”
“If you want.”
I probably should have thought more before I answered that, but I wasn’t thinking too heavily back then. My mind was clear and I was enjoying that lucidity very much.
We approached the crowd. It was very noisy and unhappy. In fact I got some very awkward bitch-stares from people who were perplexed at my calm slightly happy demeanour.
“ALL OF US SINNERS, WE ALL HAVE SINNED! WE GONNA BE PUNISHED. PRAY, PRAY ALL OF YOU FOR REPE-
The annoying individual was cut short by a swift smack to the head. A burly fellow wearing the same uniform as the woman with red hair stood behind the man and crossed his arms with a grim stare.
“Behave.” He said. I laughed.
“We don’t tolerate preachers so best you shut up about it.” Spoke the red-head into the microphone. “Now I suspect you’re all confused, scared, mourning, etcetera… But I’ve got a busy day ahead so please just try and act as orderly and calm as possible and follow those of us wearing a red coat. Try to keep questions to yourselves as we’ll be here all bloody day otherwise. You’ll each be assigned an imp shortly, who’ll be happy to explain everything in meticulous detail. Okay? Okay.”
And that was that. She walked inside the tower, and the others in red uniforms rounded us up like sheep. Inevitably, people screamed out questions,
“Are we going to be punished?”
“What did I do wrong?”
“I’m a good person!”
“Where am I?!”
“This doesn’t make sense!”
“Please, I want to go home!”
“I can’t remember anything, how did I die?”
After a while, I drowned the voices out. I also drowned out Edward’s voice, who was babbling incessantly by my side. After a few minutes we entered the tower. Inside, it was much larger looking.
“Ade? I don’t mean to take the piss but, are we in a train station?”
I had to laugh at that, too… Because it did seem that way. The main interior was covered in rails, as where the walls surrounding the tower and the various constructs above me into the high, high ceiling. Carriages hung from the walls vertically, ready to ship groups of people to their destinations. One such carriage emerged from beneath the earth and docked before us. The carriage appeared to be made out of stone.
“Those of you who died in the tragic train accident, I apologize but special treatment can’t be taken. This is the only mode of transport for you. Besides don’t complain, I was eaten by a shark.”
The burly fellow rolled his eyes, “Can I go a shift without her bringing that up?”
A few carriages came and went before me and Ed was permitted to be seated. The interior was bizarrely un-train-like, more closely resembling a church. The rows of seats were lined in red fabric, and the windows looked very much like stained glass. In fact you could barely see out of them at all and the train was filled with odd multi-coloured lights. We walked down the red carpet aisle and seated ourselves in a two-seater row near the back.
“How are you staying so calm about this, Ade?”
“I have absolutely no idea.”
“The windows are distorted for a reason, please don’t stare out of them if you value your sanity.”
My stomach leapt into my brain as the train took a near vertical drop. Moments later, the entire carriage was filled with a very bright light. The lights danced around the carriage beautifully.
“It’s procedure to advise everyone to close their eyes, but I know you won’t. Just don’t stare out the window.”
It’s true; no one I could see closed their eyes. The pretty lights were distracting everyone from the essentially horrific situation. It made me smile too, and I craned over to the warped window to have a peek.
“She said not to do that!” Warned Ed,
“Oh it’s not so bad, look. It’s just white really you can’t make much out.”
Ed leaned over my lap to take a peek, then stammered and knocked his head on the window-sill. I pushed him off me and adjusted him into his seat,
“Clumsy clot.”
“Woah, I think I just tripped.” He said.
“Yes, I saw.”
“No, like… Drug trip, man.”
The journey neared it’s end and the windows turned black again. We still appeared to be boring further and further down.
“Don’t mind the smell, you’ll get used to it.” On cue, a pungent aroma filled the cabin. Almost like when on a regular train journey you pass a recently fertilized field. It was like that, but the smell was nothing I could have placed. The disapproving moans of the other passengers were clear that it wasn’t a great one.
The carriage aligned itself back to normal gravity and slowed it’s pace, “This is the Rivers District, the third layer of ‘Hell’, though we call it Mesembria here. We’re currently calling at Styx General Station, the busiest station in all of Rivers so be sure not to get lost. You’ve each got an imp waiting for you and they should find you. Please look for someone in a uniform if you can’t find your imp, but that’s unlikely to happen so just be patient, please.”
“Styx…” I whispered, “That sounds familiar to me.”
“One of the rivers of hell, in’nit?” Ed eloquently explained.